Accepting Change: Editing a Novel

I’m currently in the middle of editing my most recent book project. Editing and revising a novel always comes with a fun little jolt of nerves at the beginning.

You spend months writing a book, then take a break. Once you finally decide to return to it, there’s always that small moment where panic sets in. You open the document… and freeze.

“What if the book doesn’t work? What if all of this work was for nothing?”

It doesn’t matter whether this is your first time editing a book or your tenth—that question usually shows up right at the start.

I had that moment when I started editing this book as well. It stopped me for a couple of days because I was worried all of my hard work would have to be scrapped.

Of course, that wasn’t the case.

But man, that feeling hits every single time I edit.

Instead of jumping straight into revisions, I decided to compare the beginning and the end of the book. I read the last five chapters and then immediately went back and read the first five.

Luckily for me, the book wasn’t broken.

The issue was that the beginning didn’t align tonally with the rest of the novel. If you’ve ever written a long-form creative project, you probably know this is a pretty common problem. No one gets everything perfect on the first pass.

The opening was still doing its job from a storytelling perspective, but it felt like it belonged to a slightly different version of the book.

So I grabbed a notepad and wrote down three things I noticed:

  • The opening chapters are plot-focused, while the rest of the novel is much more character-focused.
  • One character exists mostly to deliver lore. She needs a more distinct personality that matches who she becomes later.
  • The group gets along too well at the beginning. They need more tension and disagreement.

Once I had those notes, rewriting became surprisingly enjoyable.

Instead of staring at a blank page wondering what to change, I had a clear list of objectives. The story itself stayed the same, but the execution became much closer to what I wanted the project to be.

After that, I settled back into my normal editing process:

  • Chapter/Story Pass: Does this chapter need to be rewritten? Does the story itself need to change?
  • Spelling and Grammar Passes: This always takes longer than I expect. You’d be surprised how many mistakes your brain simply skips over. I usually do three or four passes before moving on.
  • Final Read-Through: One last pass to make sure everything flows naturally and nothing obvious slipped through.

I’m sure everyone develops their own editing process, and there’s no single “correct” way to revise a book. The goal is simply to polish your story until it’s the strongest version you can create before sending it to beta readers or beginning the querying process.

My biggest takeaway is this:

Don’t be afraid to make changes.

If something isn’t working, it’s almost always better to fix it than to force it to work. More often than not, whatever replaces it ends up being stronger than the original.

At the same time, take your time with revisions. You’d be amazed how much you can miss in a single pass. Build a process that gives you multiple opportunities to catch problems—but also make sure that process keeps you moving forward. You don’t want to spend an entire month revising one paragraph.

Finally—and I think this is the hardest lesson to learn—understand that there comes a point where you have to close the document and send it out.

If you chase the idea of a perfect manuscript, you’ll never finish it.

Eventually, you have to sit back, accept that you’ve done the best work you can, and let your project out into the world.

It’s scary.

But after spending months—or even years—bringing a story to life, I think every manuscript deserves the chance to see the light of day.


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